WOW!!! EPIC!!!
this is an awesome trance techno song .. great beat , great buildups i especially loved the piano in the 2;30's . and that biuldup that goes for a WHOLE MINUTE... awesome work.. seriously frikkin awesome
5/5 10/10
WOW!!! EPIC!!!
this is an awesome trance techno song .. great beat , great buildups i especially loved the piano in the 2;30's . and that biuldup that goes for a WHOLE MINUTE... awesome work.. seriously frikkin awesome
5/5 10/10
Thanks symbolllllllllllllllllll. :DDDDDDDD
Holy mother of god
this is friggin monumentaly evil man .... friggin kickass all the way.... this is deadly city ninja music all the way. i could definatly go around the city in the dark lopiing heads off with a katana with this blasting in my earphones
5/5 10/10 and FAVED
meh
... i couldbe better if you took the violins and played an actually disonent minor melody... some space bells could help also... and you need more rumbling.. like really low bass rumbling.
not bad though keep werkin on it
3/5 6/10
Thnks man, I know what you mean, I didnt realize how empty it sounded until i put it on here. But thanks for the comment man!!
that was really heartfelt sounding
beautiful.. really beautiful.. i love the title of the song it sets the mood for this melencholy masterpiece. i especially love the piano work at 1;55.
faved
5/5
10/10
young padawan
the song lacks a meodiy that goes anywhere, the drums lack inflation and deflation and fills.. the synths need EQing and some chorus effects.... the most important thing you need is song structure.... the typical song structure is..... intro .. verse... 1/2 chorus ... verse full chorus lead to........ bridge...chorus....chorus with harmony....outro wich should be chorus with intro ... alot of my usic doesnt do this but...BUT... drums are your friend...i am more than happy to send you an organized drum machine file... and dude take what i tellyou and ignore it ...but get experimental and try different thing try effect you may not think work and then try to work with them... making a song isnt about trying to follow a pettern it about what you think should come next..... plus the software you use could hinder you if you dont know its fullcapabilities... well ...i like your selection of synths and the speed and seriously ...FUCK horribly FUCK weith your drum machine till you have a groove that you are happy with...AGAIN PM me if you wanna collab dude...if you use ACID it will be hard but we can work around that.
3/5 for potential 7/10 for effort and sound
BTW i dont mean to sound prickish...im just critical and LOVE to help people out ...... the more you help the more you learn
SYMBOL:CYMBAL
On the right track :)
Your definatly onto something here ...i noticed you kinda did the prodigy line and drum roll after it ..prolly not intentionally but it works...the drums in this piece are friggin sweet dude just up that treble on the bass just a tad ...and definatly throw some string samples in there...after all the name is classical in a trance on fire..and a lead line..this has great potential... maybe some scattering bleeps and blips thatgo with the key.. like64th note blips and beeps...just revamp it a little and this is a solid ten dude
Yeah the drum roll was very intentional, took me about half an hour to get it to sound perfect, and about five seconds to screw it up again. I hate my nOObness at FL :(
Thanks for the suggestions, I'll definately use them if I ever get around to finsihing this thing.
-Pants
heartwarming
i LOVE the begining withthe thunder and soft sad piano that transends into the lively moving beat .... the harmonies are great and the melody is solid......The beat came in at a perfect 1.15..perfect placement...just when you feel like the piano is riseing out of ashes the beat kicks in and make it so much more epic.. i like at 55 you cut the bass piano line and focus on higher notes to set it up for 1.15
great piano playing great song structure
5/5 10/10
thanks for the great listen
thanks for the great review :D
WOW!!!
damn dude ..that was friggin great...yeah man it doesnt kick in till about 45 but damn ..when it kicks in it fuckin delivers.... you definatly gotta come up woith a bridge and an end for this ..its going too damn well to just leave as is.... i love the bassline especially and the epic sound at 45 and the computer blips...PM me when you have this one finished man.... but i would speed it up just another 5 BPM
5/5 10/10 favorited
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