PAINFULL!! but in that good way
when the begining played i thought it was going to end up being a cover of "Down here at the pawn shop" from sublime... i LOLd when it wasnt.
Well back to the song at hand. I like the distortion effect. I like some of the riff that you played.The song doesnt really get to its full potential until 1:34.
Once that part hits the songs gets alot molre interesting, and is pretty much why im writing a review. All in all i think its great work but i do have some suggetions.
1. Change up the drums a lil bit, get them to jump around somewhat. Maybe not the tempo but when the song gets a lil heavier open the high hat and throw in some tom work and some rolls and fills.
2. EQ the drums a lil better and toss some reverb in it. If it sounds like a drum machine with guitar over it it will sound like something you did in music class.
add a lil reverb itll sound like you did it in a studio.
3. well im out of suggestions but i loved the guitar playing and the distortion that you found i think fits the style alot ... kinda bluesy but kinda southern rockish.
all in all you get a 4 and an 7
keep it up sir